Comments from clark25
|2011-08-03 04:20:47||Caught III||Liked the story series. I especially liked the twist of the mum being a bit of a bitch. She was clearly in charge the whole time. I think you could do a lot with that theme. Its different which is what worked for me. Please try to avoid the pregnancy route. Its such a boner killer and usually signals to me that the writer has run out of ideas. I know I might sound big headed, its not supposed to come over like that. I am just a fan of what you have done so far.|
|2011-08-16 08:06:03||Caught IV||I find it funny that the majority of negative comments are from "Anonymous" some of these people are just hiding behind it.
Good story, totally different from the first 3 though. Which I really liked.