Comments from TallStranger

Date Story title Comment
2010-08-31 22:57:23 A Roed Trip with My Grand Daughter-Part IV the whole series...keep up the great writing....Kristy is a great little character...
2010-09-01 06:19:55 Kelly the Mystery Girl Nice me up and going this morning, thanks!
2010-09-01 08:11:58 A Night With My Younger Step Sister Very nice first others have said a little inconsistant in places...but with more attention to detail you'll do have a good feel for writing it seems.

Keep writing and's the only way to get really good at it.
2010-09-01 13:22:14 Really HOT story....brought back many a memory from my teen years....from making out at the movies to climbing through windows late at night....

Verry well written...I'm still hard.....;)
2010-09-02 13:18:00 Turbulence A jewel of a story....glad you publised it. Is there more?