Comments from TallStranger
|2010-08-31 22:57:23||A Roed Trip with My Grand Daughter-Part IV||Hell-of-a-story...love the whole series...keep up the great writing....Kristy is a great little character...|
|2010-09-01 06:19:55||Kelly the Mystery Girl||Nice story....got me up and going this morning, thanks!|
|2010-09-01 08:11:58||A Night With My Younger Step Sister||Very nice first effort...as others have said a little inconsistant in places...but with more attention to detail you'll do fine....you have a good feel for writing it seems.
Keep writing and learning....it's the only way to get really good at it.
|2010-09-01 13:22:14||Really HOT story....brought back many a memory from my teen years....from making out at the movies to climbing through windows late at night....
Verry well written...I'm still hard.....;)
|2010-09-02 13:18:00||Turbulence||A jewel of a story....glad you publised it. Is there more?|