Comments from breadnbutter
|2010-09-09 18:20:36||Stepdaughter Laura:||cant say any more than the other two posters about spelling and grama.
you also got intot he sex side a bit quick, no sooner had she walked in he was in her panties.
|2010-09-12 16:09:11||My Life - a foursome at last||i likede it. not having seen your other stories i wasnt sure of the relationship of them all to begin with so a short introduction would have helped.|
|2010-09-26 16:02:15||Tony and I have a suprise fuck||To the last reader
Nice idea, but this IS A TRUE story and what your suggesting would take this into Fiction. i just hope you like the rest as nothing like what your suggesting happens. (breadnbutter)
|2010-11-06 08:57:39||The Sisters Game - Part 1||good story, hope 2 is as good or better|
|2010-11-06 18:48:09||The Little Mormon Girl||the intro said 'little mormon girl, so how could the ending be a suprise, it was obvious she would get pregnant and they would marry, it was to me anyway, pitty the spelling was crap, grama wasn't up to much either in places, has potential|