Comments from annasdaddy
|2010-09-23 22:30:03||A Walk In The Woods||I though it was decent. I thought it could use a lot of punctuation correction and it had some verisimilitude issues, e.g., she was seven through most of the story but nine in one passage.|
|2010-09-24 20:08:56||A Daughter's Evolution||Wow, thanks for the comments! First of all, yes, this is fiction. If I knew of someone really doing any of these things, I would (at the very least) tell the authorities. As I read through it I realize that I kind of rushed the last part a bit. I know that pre-pubescent girls can orgasm based on women telling me so (I'm a guy so I can't say from first hand experience). I realize some of the details get fuzzy and I'll revise that.
Thanks for the input!!!! Even if it's critical or negative (not to confuse the two).
|2010-09-24 20:17:51||If this is plagiarism then you're an asshole. Otherwise it's pretty good. Consequently I won't give you a positive or negative rating.|
|2010-09-24 20:20:34||all about honey||Barely merits a response. Does make me wonder about your sanity. Somehow intriguing in spite of its shortcomings.|
|2010-09-24 20:21:58||AlmaDelia's life||You could really really use some proofreading. How hard it is to at least make the effort? Couldn't even get into the content.|