Comments from Dancefire

Date Story title Comment
2010-09-22 02:35:26 Needs to be rewritten.
2010-09-22 02:39:34 Forbidden Chapter 1 Good start though a bit rushed and needs more more text to become a story... looking good so far however.
2010-09-22 02:49:10 Sister Catches Brother No... just... no... Was utterly blue balling.
2010-09-22 02:53:27 Sex with my Hot elder sister Meh story... average but not enough detail.
2010-09-22 11:54:11 geting in to moms pants Too quick and too short. Also in incest stories you can't jump so quickly into smut.