Comments from tigerlilyNdick

Date Story title Comment
2012-10-29 16:15:45 Like Old Times Great Start! ~ Getting Really Close To Home. . .
2012-11-09 14:44:52 A new life - part 3 Kind Of A Fun Story BUT Very Dificult To Fallow ~ Paragraphs Running Together Like This Make People Tend To Just Give Up & Walk Away. . . . . . .

I Did Complete This One BUT Will Not Start Another Chapter Unless There Is Some Structure... Like I Said "Kinda Fun" BUT I Will Not Struggle Through Another Chapter, It's Just Not Worth It!
2012-11-10 04:25:38 Grandpa & Jackie 4 Pretty Good Story BUT VERY Dificult To Follow ~ Needs Some Structure.

It Helps Me To Write The Story With A Word Processor Like PAGES Or WORD, , , , Even Notepad. Find A Format YOU Like And Stick To It.

Check Spelling, Punctuation, Sentence and Paragraph Structure Before Posting The Story
2012-11-27 03:47:44 A cuckold, in his rightful place Yeah, A Little Dificult To Read, , , BUT I'm Glad I Stuck With It.....
I Like It!!!
2012-11-28 22:13:51 traci"story I Guess I'm Just Missing Something Here. . . . . ?