Comments from grizx

Date Story title Comment
2012-08-04 17:01:05 Struck By Lightning Don't let all the negative feedback discourage you. Get help from an editor. it will help alot. Its easy to see your not a professional writer yet but this is the kind of place to start learning.
2012-08-20 18:55:17 A Game of Inches - Part Fourteen Just when I thought it was over, another twist. Great writing definately one of my favorites.
2014-08-29 04:25:28 Dragon Queen Ch 1 Part 2, Fallen Star A good start I'm looking forward to more.