Comments from BigWayne

Date Story title Comment
2010-12-20 19:17:52 Me and Dad in the Woods: Part 2 I appreciate that. Thanks.

Yeah, I tend to get a little carried away and vulgar when I start going good and I'm feeling a bit amorous while writing. That comes from typing with only one hand, ifyaknowhutimeen. X-) Sometimes I tend to put a little too much detail in them, and they get a bit long winded and stay in one scene for too long. I try to give the reader a good bit of detail so they can get into a character. My main problem is using a limited amount of descriptive words too frequently. My vocabulary isn't all that extensive, and I have to keep referring to all the time to get a fresh word for one I've used a lot.
2010-12-20 19:41:20 Me and Dad in the Woods: Part 1 I am still currently adding to this, and I expect at least 4 chapters at least. Thanks for reading. All comments, good or bad, are welcome.