| 2011-10-02 09:14:09 |
Rachael's Story - Chapter 2 - Caught
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Superb story, Rachael. Well written and very hot!!! |
| 2011-10-02 09:16:58 |
Rachael's Story - Chapter 3 - Morning Showers
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Loved Billy fondling her as they watched the girls. Very hot! |
| 2011-10-02 10:04:53 |
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Fantastic story, Rachael. Well written with good detail, grammar, spelling, punctuation, and spelling. Those make stories so much easier to read. But most of all it was hot. You had me hard the whole time, wishing I was the one doing all those dirty things to you. Keep writing!!! |
| 2011-10-15 07:34:31 |
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Great story, Rachael. You are one of the better writers here. Keep up the good work. |
| 2011-12-06 07:46:05 |
Wife Makes Me a Twilight Fan
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Excellent story. Great premise, good detail and hot action. That' the only way you could get me to watch "Twilight", too. I hope you will write more. |