Comments from chocolate thunda19

Date Story title Comment
2011-02-24 16:58:56 Awesome story wright more!!
2011-02-28 00:14:52 lol that was a really cool story
2011-03-11 13:34:07 My first time with April great story keep it cummin
2011-04-02 22:40:51 Im looking foward 2 more, keep goin
2011-04-21 01:09:50 Summer Vacation not 2 bad, but give more details and space out your sentences more. you have lots of room use it. Also proofread your work, that way you wont have many mistakes