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2012-03-02 00:22:54 Teen Fantasies Become Reality I agree with the previous poster. It was rushed and the dialogue seems to be very artificial. And what the fuck? They go from losing their virginity straight into wanting to have kids and then molesting them as well? I understand that this is fiction but damn, that is a bit of a stretch. Short version is this: Don't give up, take your time to tell the story properly, and try to have it at least be somewhat believable.
2012-03-02 00:41:53 My early years: Part one: Mary's lesson I'll back you up on that. I'm sure I had them, but my first memory of one was around 12 or so. I'm sure I got them from time to time but never really paid attention. And once I did start noticing them, it was all down hill from there.
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