Comments from clarabelle
|2011-04-03 01:56:50||Joe on the Road-Chapter II (Natasha)||wow your spelling and grammar is at times a bit awful. Really good characterizations though, Joe is very 3 dimensional. A bit disappointing that he can't relate to women as anything other than sex objects - you could look at this from Joe's perspective I 'spose and say that he's being used for his cock (which sounds like a very nice one btw) lol. Well written on the whole, great unusual style.
Thanks for sharing