Comments from MrSoftee
|2013-06-23 12:59:15||Girls In My Shed||OMG this site!! A bloc of 5 negatives from one person and 50+ nonsense comments...
Well I suppose 30 days for the top section is too long, some people must be fed up of seeing this there. Still, it's a bit harsh, some new readers are still coming along and with a lot of negatives it'd need thousands of votes to ever make it into the top bracket after 30 days. Be fair please.
Anyway I'll bring up some of the genuine comments...
|2013-06-23 13:02:02||Girls In My Shed||MrSoftee
Thanks sofman, very generous of you.
Extremely well written... Not fond of bad grammar, fortuitous language or crassness. Well done!
|2013-06-23 13:02:48||Girls In My Shed||Anonymous reader
Fucking hot and great story,keep it up dude!
|2013-06-23 13:06:07||Girls In My Shed||MrSoftee
Thanks lolaheiress I meant to say, and Diego, interesting comments. More dialogue during sex I'll definitely think about, and I agree in hindsight I wish I'd done a little bit more with Sheila. She's not sexy tho lol. No part 2 sorry this was its natural end, but you can imagine them all having a great time for a long time :) Now I have to think of a new story...
This is Diego again. Author, the story is great. Perhaps a bit more dialogue during sex would be good. But it was an overall good story. The scene was set very well although perhaps a bit too much detail and we didnt get to know the wife very well. I suppose part 2 will take care of that. Good job and keep it up author. Pun intended.
|2013-06-23 13:07:12||Girls In My Shed||3210launch
Mr. Softee-- This story was great. It was sexy and mature and comfortable in a way that suited the characters and narrator perfectly. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories, but what can top two sexy teen girls and a hint of the forbidden?