Comments from MrSoftee
|2011-09-05 05:15:08||I love the way you tell the story. For me personally I'd be wary of letting the mind control theme take charge of the story, as it gets harder to suspend my disbelief and there's less suspense when the hero can do just anything. My 2c :)
For spellchecking I just use Chrome browser and check in the site editor after pasting.
|2011-09-08 11:04:09||Rebecca Chapter 01||Heh, terrific writing! Not my genre normally but so well done I really enjoyed it.|
|2011-09-23 03:50:25||Trainee Secretary Required, Great Salary, Suit School Leaver. chapter 4||The easiest way to get to my Lushstories.com stories is to put
'Lushstories MrSoftee' into Google :)
Maybe I'll bring one or two over here; not this one though as it runs to 17 chapters :)
|2011-09-24 12:20:57||Coping with Retirement, part 1 - I Build It, and a Girl Comes||Thanks for your comments everyone. Chapter 2 is just getting under way.
Daddy's Vengeance series - in my mind that was concluded, and the ratings and no. of comments seemed to point that way too. But...do other readers think it still has somewhere to go? I originally meant to stop after Ch3, then after Fruition, so now after Ultimate... :))
|2011-09-28 09:57:52||Sorry about the italics, everyone - formatting cockup, I've asked the mods to fix it :)|