Comments from MrSoftee
|2011-09-28 18:24:02||Coping with Retirement, part 2 - It's Like the Good Old Days||OK I've reissued this story to fix the problem that the original one was 2/3 in italics and hard to read!|
|2011-10-05 16:02:02||Coping with Retirement part 3 - Janie's Tale||In response to the previous interesting comment, my approach to Janie's retelling of her fuck with David was not really a 'review' but more about what SHE got out of it. This not being a what-happens-next adventure story like Daddy Avenges but more about relationships.
So the pensioner is saved by the teens, who help him rediscover his freedom, but also the teens have their horizons broadened by the pensioner, and that's what Janie's tale is about..
Also the pensioner facilitates their lesbian relationships obviously by being actually MORE broad-minded than their (younger) parents..
Not sure about it being hard to follow. Anyone else found this?
The grammar is deliberately a bit incorrect, and the syntax less structured I suppose, with its being 'written' by a 15-yr-old. Is that it?
Thx for the comments! MORE comments please!!! :)
|2011-10-14 11:56:41||Lovely story! Really involved me.|
|2011-10-14 16:10:20||Owned By A Teenage Goddess||TOP story, sooo well written!!
Really kept me involved and amused all the way through.
|2011-10-18 16:36:58||Coping with Retirement, part 4 - Lettie's Brother||OK Spazzman fair comment, I guess it depends whether you identify or not. The idea was to cover the male age range with the teen girls being a universally appealing constant :)
I probably am going to do another chapter and if so hopefully that'll work better for you again.