Comments from MrSoftee
|2011-12-12 02:30:58||Coping with Retirement, part 5 - Sibling Rivalry||You wouldn't have a chapter just to introduce a relatively minor character though. He's explained by being a teacher at the school all of them go to and the way the story is about that exact kind of thing; then the story has to keep moving. I think your expectations are a bit out of kilter with the storyline tbh.
Anyway glad to have had your interest, if I do any more on this story maybe I'll flesh him out a bit, as it were.
|2011-12-22 12:37:40||Haha very funny and cleverly written! More please.|
|2013-05-31 17:35:54||Life Never Fades||This is a very beautiful story.|
|2013-06-11 11:58:42||Cassie||Wow terrific writing. Class.|
|2013-06-13 12:50:03||Girls In My Shed||Thanks sofman, very generous of you.|