Comments from Rufus_T_Firefly

Date Story title Comment
2011-04-17 00:19:42 My Sister Suzie Q Completely unreadable.
2011-04-18 00:27:36 Birthday sex - re written due to poor spelling The spelling is still very poor. The sentence construction is poor and use of paragraphs non-existent. Unless English is not your primary language, this is total drivel.
2012-05-04 17:52:53 Cousin Amanda First Time incest. The sentence structure is horrible. The capitalization, punctuation and spelling is even worse. If English is not your first language, then I recommend that you write the story in your native tongue and then have it translated by someone who is fluent in English.
2013-02-14 22:50:18 Young white girl tutor blacked by african basketball player Very well done. I prefer the "virgin" to be a bit reluctant in these stories. Do not let the idiots posting racist diatribes keep you from posting more stories.
2013-03-02 21:45:55 The Rapper and the Sportscaster - Down in The Dumps Totally unreadable garbage.