Comments from BlueNinja

Date Story title Comment
2011-04-22 23:02:25 Cinema Part 1 No I didn't steal this story, I'm not using my old profile as all my stories accidentally got deleted when I requested for a few of them to be taken down. Yes, the intro is a bit long but it's for a good reason, I wanted to build up a good base for the story, and I know it may seem a bit unrealistic, but it's not, there are people brave enough to go out on a limb like this and if you disagree, I'm sorry, it's a fantasy, and it's my fantasy.
2011-04-24 01:33:51 Hitting The Showers Part 1 My old profile is no longer in use as my all stories accidentally got deleted. So this is the newly edited version.
2011-04-24 21:40:17 Hitting The Showers Part 1 Actually no. If you did your research you'd find that countless species indulge in homosexual relationships, not just humans. What's more natural than that? And isn't the definition of "natural" something that occurs in nature? And since humans are a part of nature surely anything we do can be considered natural. But it's a long debate, please read the tags before you click on a story.
2011-04-26 04:37:12 I love you, Caden - Chapter One The story was sweet and cute, but the writing style made it boring and hard to keep reading. It felt too stilted and... not factual, but almost like an essay. I'm struggling to find the right word but it just didn't flow well, felt a bit amateur. Sorry, i guess you just need practice.
2011-04-26 05:10:37 Blonde Boys Bash Sorry but that wasn't good. The writing was amateur and the story moved too fast to be enjoyed let alone believed (I know it was fiction but even then it should be realistic to some degree). The sentences were stilted and of a very poor quality as far as creative writing goes.