Comments from curiousscouser
|2014-10-18 15:05:05||L'il Slut||Oh I love this! This is exactly my sort of domination - any fool can hit me but it is a rare man who can burrow into my mind.|
|2011-04-26 11:02:17||Lessons||Yum - those are lessons worth learning :)|
|2011-04-26 20:14:19||The Travel Show||Fabulous story, thanks for posting it!|
|2011-08-13 18:01:04||First Kiss||Thankyou for such kind comments, it's lovely to get feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed it.|
|2011-09-05 05:33:00||First Kiss||Thanks for all your comments, I love getting your feedback.
I wrote this story after being challenged to write a non-BDSM story. Having accepted that challenge I decided to upset all of my normal conventions. I wanted characters who were older and had the same insecurities we all have, rather than being perfect confident Ken and Barbie clones. To give them such insecurities it was necessary to give both of them physical characteristics that would make them appear "ugly" to the world. These traits aren't subtle, but it's a too short a story to allow for much subtlety with them.
Hope this explains the physical flaws of the characters.
Thanks for reading!