Comments from gordonjackx
|2012-12-31 12:37:04||The Sisters Chapter 1||Nice beginning. Just try to get the English right so that your readers are not distracted by it. Also a bit of a story line would be nice so we can follow the tale and see where it leads us.
|2013-01-04 06:35:21||Breaking In Girlfriend's Sister Part 2 [Short]||Enjoyed the story but somehow couldn't picture it as a girl's writing. Guess my own story might have the same problem|
|2013-01-04 06:54:39||GRETA||Well done - a great story and I think your English is just fine.
Please read my story "Eight" and give me your thoughts.
|2013-01-05 23:35:33||Motel love - not the sleazy kind! (based on a true story)||Thanks Alyssa - grea't story - wish everything that is good for you guys|