Comments from kristof2050
|2011-07-24 18:24:00||May-Ling the Litle Chinese American part 1||I use LibreOffice and it says it is all good. This is the first story I have written and since I am an amateur I don't expect it to be perfect. Just like I wouldn't expect anyone's stories on XNXX to be perfect, every one's on here is at different levels and you have to take the good with the bad and read it for the story to see if you like it.
About writing another part there will be secound.
|2011-07-25 23:23:15||Games at Work||Great story, hope to see another part to it.|
|2011-07-30 19:38:59||Live-in Maintenance Man||If i keep making the same mistakes on the same words please let me know so I can correct the original on my computer.
I am already working on the second part.
Thanks for the positive feed back.
|2011-07-30 19:56:09||Live-in Maintenance Man||Check again the mother is 36, says in the beginning then states she looks 25.
|2011-07-30 20:02:43||Live-in Maintenance Man||Check again the mother is 36, says in the beginning then states she looks 25.