Comments from DLGBLG
|2011-07-22 01:01:32||Sir, please may I cum?||Please feel free to leave me any feedback. This is my first story that I have written, I hope you enjoy it as much as I did,.. :-)|
|2011-07-26 06:59:42||The potential client||My apologies on the punctuation. Somehow my quotes all turned to question marks. I will definitely work on part 2. :-)
Would love to hear any feedback, this is only the second thing I have written.
|2011-07-26 19:19:42||The potential client||Thank you very much for the feedback. I appreciate it, I was concerned with the way it showed on my screen, so I'm glad it's just on my version.
In response to the question of what I am like...I think we all have that person in us that we want to be. As far as the description of her, yes I used myself to describe her and fantasies always make a good story don't they? Part 2 on the way tonight.
|2011-07-27 07:12:55||Meeting Michelle||Almost made me wish my car would break down. Your skills are wonderful!|
|2011-07-27 07:17:03||Becoming one with Clarissa||I would love to see more work from you. The details you include really make you feel like you're watching a movie. Excellent!
I also like the leading up to it. It isn't just sex, it's everything involved.