Comments from JimmyMcNally

Date Story title Comment
2012-05-10 13:56:57 Substitute Rides the Bus Some times less is more. too much detail can make it boaring.
2012-05-13 20:43:56 The Satanic Witch Ritual aka (The Lilith Touch) I have absolutely no idea what I just read.
2012-05-13 21:25:12 Mine and Daddy's little secret I can not rate what I can not read. There is a lot of criticizing but none telling you how to fix it. You need to proofread. fix what you find wrong and double space between paragraphs. Take your time, and always PROOF READ your work.
2012-05-15 00:30:17 PARTY I dont know what is going on with the doubling of my posts. seems the last three stories I have posted have posted twice.
2012-06-07 00:46:59 Equestrian reversal. The rider is ridden Very hard to follow. I lost intrest very quickly