Comments from JimmyMcNally

Date Story title Comment
2012-07-26 10:34:08 Brother's love- Part 1 I am sorry but I have to give this one a negative rating. It starts off with bad grammar and dose not get any easier to read. Use a grammar editor if you have one. It will not catch all the trouble but will help. Proof read, always proof your work and when your going through it hit enter when ever you reach a paragraph. This will put a second paragraph key on the text and separate them in here. Above all Don't give up on your writing.
2012-11-04 16:00:03 Sweet Little Sister You are doing fine. Proofreading can only catch so much as you know what you ment to write and will see that as you read. Spell check and grammer tic will also only catch so much. errors are going to occor. Yes I would like to see a second part.
2012-11-04 16:11:13 Helena's Nightmare It is a great story.
2013-05-15 20:16:03 Boy with the Saint Vitus touch I quite enjoyed this story. I hope that you do continue and add to it.
2013-09-02 00:35:22 Your getting more positive comments on this series, because it is better then your other one. ( I just wish they would fix the programing on here so that it didn't fuck up your formating makes it damn hard to read.) Take your time don't rush and try to get the next part out till your ready. I am working on stories I started forty years ago. and others just come out as quick as you can type. Your doing good.