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2011-12-08 11:43:53 Singing Jasen's Song: Part 4 Be nice to your poor refresh button! Sorry, everyone. Final exams are next week here, so I will be spending the next ten days doing nothing but studying and finishing up papers.

There will be a part 5, I just can't say how soon. Thanks for reading!
-SS
2011-12-16 12:08:06 Sharing Jack's Bed: Part 1 I don't mean to be rude and disagree, but the word "understatement" itself, only appears two times total in all four parts. Maybe it just stuck out to you, or something of that nature?
2011-12-24 15:30:39 Singing Jasen's Song: Part 4 I would like to apologize to everyone. As soon as finals ended, holiday stuff began. I haven't had a free moment. I promise promise promise I will do what I can to get it up before new years!
2011-12-24 15:35:05 Singing Jasen's Song: Part 1 I do assure you that I do basic editing. It's not possible to catch everything and for that I apologize. Your frustrations are understandable. I also assure you that I'm not aware of any instance of switching from first to third person. If you have any examples of such, do inform me so that I may correct it.

As for the switching of perspectives, yes I do know that it didn't quite work out the way that I wanted to. I'm working on making it less confusing, and I'm very sorry for that. The reason that this may seem so novice compared to my others is that it is. This is my first attempt at third person, and therefore novice. Thank you for your comment; I always take any suggestions given to heart.
2012-01-13 11:49:03 Singing Jasen's Song: Part 5 Hey everyone,
Another part will be coming as soon as I can get it done. I promise, it's in the works. Also, so sorry for a huge lack of editing in a certain section of this part. For those of you who caught it, I hope it didn't cause too much confusion.

Thanks for reading.
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