||i'm not american but could easily understand the use of the ga head as being meant as a local dialect, gave the mother an accent the reader could imagine which is a small point but more important than you think. as for the arseholes who were critical ? you'll always get that and you'll find that they have never written anything and have no right to disparage others. good story, tho i was disappointed she was blonde as i'd been imagining her differently until then, if the description had come at the beginning it would have been better but thats just nit picking. hot story, well written, did it for me.