Comments from AngelEyes15

Date Story title Comment
2011-11-02 04:52:34 Holiday in the South of France very nice story :)
2011-11-03 05:58:23 Bait and Switch Ch. 01 it gets too easy with all the switches just inventing them so he can do anything at all. then surprise surprise the bully has a tiny dick and the hero has a giant one.

so for me it started really great but i lost it as it went on.
2011-11-05 17:13:55 The Weekend Dinner have to agree it's not very interesting and the writing is dull too
2011-11-08 09:30:49 I am the Puppet MAter Chapter One: Coin Operated Girl have to agree the lead character is not likeable enough/at all

and just another mind control story with no limits, it's too easy and not interesting

typical boy's story really!!
2011-11-08 15:49:45 Vanish wow, what a great story

where have the negatives come from??

+ from me anyway :-)