Comments from Innocent-John
|2011-11-01 11:58:24||Daddy luvin||Dear Miss MindTrip,wonderfully engrossing story of you and your dad. Did your mum ever discover your secrets? Whenever you'd care to leave home, may I adopt you, pleeease?|
|2011-11-03 17:48:12||Please Fuck Me Son!||Not a bad effort. If you expand on the dialogue, so that we see a heated, lustful interaction (verbal intercourse during the sexual intercourse) between mum and her hot baby boy, it will really help in the stiffy department.
Poor spelling is no crime, but it detracts from your good story. A few minutes proof reading can fix that before submission.
It is good to see more women expressing their dirty minds.
|2011-11-03 18:07:06||Please Fuck Me Son! pt 2||Oh, you dirty bitch! A great read, keep it up (you sure got me up!) please, an improvment on Part 1.|
|2011-11-03 18:23:55||Feeling My Daughter: Part One||Drella, will you allow me to adopt you? A great story, but a proof read will help before you submit Part 2. I'd love to help out with fleshing-out some ideas, as long as it is your flesh that is being explored!|
|2011-11-07 02:33:51||Mom's Insecurities||Great story. I'll rate the stiffy factor as 8.5 out of a possible 10. I see that you have other stories posted, I'll suss them out later.
Re Mom's Insecurities II, you should be able to access the posting to edit the tag to your preferred title.