Comments from Charmbrights
|2012-02-27 06:13:10||The Real Man of the House: Ch. 1 Taking the Mother||Ignore them. The bad grammar fits a 14-year-old narrator perfectly.|
|2012-03-18 07:42:03||Executive Decision -- 6||Mixing present tense and past tense almost randomly is off-putting for the reader. Stick to past tense as this is a story, not a commentary on a football game.|
|2012-04-03 06:29:33||Jail Bait||Please check your private messages.|
|2012-04-05 06:48:06||Doomsday, the day my life changed!||A very good start to the story, if not in perfect English.
See the PM I sent you.
|2012-04-10 08:03:57||Berry Patch Cherry Picker Chapter 6||As to age limits, they SAY no under 18, but have a look at the stories in the section called "young". It is clear that this limit is not enforced.|