Comments from AriaWhitecrow

Date Story title Comment
2011-12-05 23:03:52 A Family Cruise 1 One of the more interesting stories on here! Kinda wish you had made Eve more reluctant to have sex in front of the kids
2011-12-28 01:28:08 Slave Part 2 Slave deserved it. Jealousy is an evil emotion in a slave, and purposely making X cum was just cruel
2012-01-07 00:47:12 Human Slavery Reborn: Prologue and Chapter 1, Part 1 I forgot to edit it, I wrote it late one night and Liana was supposed to be 14, not 19, but I decided to make her older and make it a little more believable
2012-01-07 00:50:12 Most riveting story. I love the dynamics of the characters
2012-04-12 00:42:16 The Succubus' Tales You need to learn how to write. The grammatical and punctuation errors in this make it really hard to read.