Comments from Wolf_Knight

Date Story title Comment
2014-04-28 09:13:32 The Hunters become the hunted part 2 Not a girl so no
2012-08-04 22:37:40 Modern Mage - Introduction (Edited) I'll be telling his story as we go along. Mind magick is just one aspect of what he can do. There are other areas he'll be using. If your familiar at all with White Wolf Games you understand more about the type of mage he is becoming. I intend the story to be as much about character development as about the sex when it occurs on the story. I appreciate all the feedback and will keep checking back and taking it into account
2012-08-06 04:09:21 Modern Mage - Introduction (Edited) Again I thank toy all for the feedback, something i should have put in the introduction but I'll add here as I added it in the third chapter is this: While there will be sex and erotica in the story, my primary purpose in writing this story is the Morality of Having Power and Using it. I never said the main character was a hero or villian, more than anything he is just a man telling his story. It's up to the individual reading to choose what role they see him in. Since there is already a contention between at least two people on this it looks like it's working. The second reason is I am thinking of actually trying to write or find a co-author to help me write a book so I need some experience with character development. I appreciate the feedback and notes, keep them coming please
2012-08-07 04:02:23 Modern Mage - Chapter 4 Apparently this chapter isn't as well liked as the others, at least right now. As I asked at the beginning of each chapter and in the comments before, please leave feedback via comment or Private Message so I can improve my writing. I can't do much about all the question marks. They seem to replace several other types of punctuation when I copy the story from my Word program to the website.
2012-08-08 13:27:27 Modern Mage - Chaper 5 I think most of the errors are occurring as I copy the story from Office Word and pasting it into the Publication tool here on the site. I read each paragraph as I go, then reread the chapter before making the copy. The question marks are popping up replacing quotations in some places and not in other. I wasn't thinking so much of the "With great power.." quote as the two ideas behind the character being: What is the morality of having and using power, and the saying "power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely" This is more for entertainment and to practice my writing skills. The only other thing I ever wrote was a kids storybook for a contest while I was in middle school more than 20 years ago. I took first place in the state but never went anywhere with it. I'm an avid reader and decided to try writing again.