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2010-05-05 23:16:25 Homecoming Wow depressing... good but depressing... CJ
2010-05-12 03:36:58 a truth or dare game changed to sex Maybe paragraphs and more coherent thoughts too... I'm not saying its a bad story by any means it could just have gone on longer and been better. At least break it up a little and give us the readers some more description what were you feeling, what did it sound like taste like ect. Just a friendly thought. CJ
2010-05-12 03:41:26 a truth or dare game changed to sex One more tiny comment... 5000 characters is not really that many my own ongoing series is right at 337 thousand characters.... Make it bigger... bigger is better. CJ
2010-05-12 03:41:34 a truth or dare game changed to sex Maybe paragraphs and more coherent thoughts too... I'm not saying its a bad story by any means it could just have gone on longer and been better. At least break it up a little and give us the readers some more description what were you feeling, what did it sound like taste like ect. Just a friendly thought. CJ
2010-05-12 21:17:55 A Sleepover With Aunt Stephanie Great story... Will there be sequels? or is this just a stand alone?
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