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Date Story title Comment
2011-05-04 13:10:44 My step-sister Sara! Wrote you a PM doll check it ...
2011-05-05 17:31:05 Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 1 – 6th Year Begins Yes could have done without all the underlining it made it terribly hard to read
2011-05-13 13:40:19 Amy's Zoophilla needs work... spelling please... a little punctuation probably... english now your first language? good idea... just needs refining.
2011-06-28 21:19:06 The Sexy Babysitter Read your work... after you have written it ... Please... that alone will help you I'm sure.
2011-07-21 20:22:15 MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT PART 1 THE RIDE (revised) Next time round amigo space out your paragraphs...