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Date Story title Comment
2011-07-22 21:48:39 MY SISTER & THE EXCHANGE STUDENT PART 2 DINNER formatting is better... now work on proof reading ...
2011-08-15 19:21:43 Tera's Horse Ride! Space out your paragraphs for easy reading... Other than that I have no complaints...
2011-10-01 15:40:33 Mom's Kids 2 Excellent there were a few little annoying repatitions that I noted but all in all it added to the story's flavor... Good stuff... keep up the good work
2011-10-21 00:13:09 Taking Mom Down to the Woods Nice story... you could have left the revelation for later... for when mom truely opens up as to the reason for her "Daddy" lust.... But other than that good stuff.
2011-11-27 16:30:17 camping with mom Part IV Needs editing... please? I promise I read it again if you edit it. whatever you did it came out badly