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Date Story title Comment
2009-11-10 17:02:57 Lucky dog Ch7: Special Accommodations I like the plot it could use a little bit of refining I think but good
2010-03-31 05:12:05 Moving brings Siblings Closer Nicely done but I might have left it open ended to expand on later.
2010-04-01 21:11:18 Karen Very nicely written... excellent lead up that holds the reader and I liked the rest as well.
2010-04-08 01:00:39 The nasty sister Yikes this could have been formatted better....Please in the future
2010-04-08 22:32:35 homecoming The story is good... The perspective leaves something to be desired. But nice for a first try