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2011-12-21 21:13:56 A Boy and His Powers IV I completely agree with the last comment so much potential in the plot is being wasted honestly a story shouldn't be only sex you need a little bit of a story line in there. and i don't know about others but i find it hard to read and enjoy a story that has a grammatical error on every other line.
2011-12-22 01:09:17 Me and mom, Under the covers, In the cold masturbating is probably the word you wanted not master baiting just from reading it i can tell its a sex story not a fishing one. but other then that it was pretty good if you write more ill probably read it.
2011-12-22 13:15:05 Home on Leave, Chapter 9 I would suggest that you just skip ahead to when he gets back and wrap up the story. I would honestly like to see him getting marcie pregnant and them just living there lives together all three of them. i think you might still have a good amount of chapters left if you use the same length you normally do. Just please don't add rape or bestiality. Love your stories and cant wait for what ever you decide to do.
2011-12-22 13:15:24 Home on Leave, Chapter 9 I would suggest that you just skip ahead to when he gets back and wrap up the story. I would honestly like to see him getting marcie pregnant and them just living there lives together all three of them. i think you might still have a good amount of chapters left if you use the same length you normally do. Just please don't add rape or bestiality. Love your stories and cant wait for what ever you decide to do.
2011-12-22 13:15:39 Home on Leave, Chapter 9 my bad on the double comment
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