Comments from GoatRavisher

Date Story title Comment
2011-12-31 15:46:10 Mom Makes a Porn Video Nice Job. Interesting scenario. Do they ALL get together?
2012-01-07 17:52:13 Bouncing on the Mower good job. A little proof reading and a little more continuity. Ages are a turn on (personally) but she could seem to act and speak more like her age. Good that you're able to come to a climax without going "all the way"
2012-03-06 23:31:24 Amy's passion intriguing setup but take your time with the action in the last paragraph. that should be half of the story