Comments from Edgar_Norfolk

Date Story title Comment
2012-01-11 23:29:45 Into The Woods part 2 Try making it into paragraphs. It'll be easier to read.
2012-01-11 23:33:35 Bait and Switch Ch. 21 (Final) I have enjoyed all of your stories. I hope you return to writing when you are able.
2012-05-08 02:56:44 sexy mom's taste part 1 Before I even begin reading your story, you should consider paragraphs as your friend.
2012-05-08 03:09:08 sexy mom's taste part 2 You still need paragraphs.