Comments from XManner

Date Story title Comment
2009-01-14 18:04:23 The Tease Difficulty reading text.
2009-02-15 19:33:21 baby girl After your other story I suggested you describe your characters in more detail... and then I clicked to this and found that you had improved in the manner I suggested. You're and excellent writer. All you need is to write more.
2009-02-15 19:33:37 Oh God... yes...! Excellent work. Although, maybe next time you can be more descriptive with the characters' appearance, aside from their actions.
2009-05-25 23:45:20 As You Desire An age-old story...