Comments from turt794

Date Story title Comment
2012-04-07 09:35:24 Bitch for a Night Novel idea and good writing. Cheers!
2012-04-07 09:38:35 My new slave Good story. Only try to split sentences and use commas wherever needed. And don't make one para chapters that makes no sense.
2012-05-11 13:09:03 Wake up baby girl: Part two awesome story. keep up the good work. :) Pandorius999
2012-05-19 17:06:25 sis's milk The sequence seems a lil skewed. A tit fuck after a pussy fuck? Still overall pretty good.
2012-05-19 17:18:35 Infiltrating the girl's school It's complicated for what reason I don't know. Apositive but barely.