Comments from Srtahovikk

Date Story title Comment
2012-04-18 10:18:27 Jessie Fan Fiction How would I improve?
2012-04-18 10:19:13 Jessie Fan Fiction Part 2 Again I ask, how should I improve?
2012-05-08 21:53:23 That Fucking Show I am incredibly sorry. I was in a rush and just assumed people would know what this was based off of. It was a fanfiction of That 70's Show.
2012-05-08 21:55:58 That Fucking Show Donna is his GF. Not jackie. Thanks for the feedback!
2012-08-02 17:57:38 Brian's Power Oh sorry! I didn't mean to make you think that the Black Ogres are actually ogres. There's all human, the Black Ogres is just a name. Sorry! Oh and I'm working on part two now. It'll be up either tonight or tomorrow afternoon!