Comments from TouringGuy
|2012-02-15 16:38:13||Fucking Teagan||Thank you all for the nice compliments. OK, I'm an idiot. During the editing to put the story on the site, I deleted a critical sentence.
During my initial conversation with Mitch, I was SUPPOSED to say "I'm no longer worried about her going off to college by herself."
Sorry about that. Tori is away at college. She will show back up at the end of the part 2 or the start of part 3. FWIW, the other parts will not be quite this long, now that most of the scenario is set up.
|2012-03-07 19:14:44||Fucking Teagan||I would like to thank everyone for your compliments and criticisms. To come here as a complete noob to this, and to have the story rate as high as it has, is beyond what I had hoped for and a distinct honor. Especially given the level of creativeness found here. Again thank you all.
SOME NOTES: Part 2 is already posted. It reads better IF you have read Part 1 first. Part 3 is underway. Sadly life gets in the way of writing sometimes and it will be several more weeks before part 3 is ready to post. I hope to have this story wrapped up in 5 parts. I do plan to use some of the characters in this series in several other short stories later.
|2012-03-07 19:26:06||Fucking Teagan part2 "Who says three is a crowd?||I want to thank you all for the nice compliments. Please check out Part1 if you haven't already. Grammer NAZI: thanks for the heads up. I will edit the next parts accordingly.
NOTE: Part 3 is underway, however sometimes life gets in the way and it will be several more weeks before part three is ready to post. I hope to have this story wrapped up in a total of five parts. Several of the characters will show up again in other short stories.
|2012-03-22 20:52:59||Fucking Teagan part2 "Who says three is a crowd?||Yes, part 3 is underway. Sometimes real life gets in the way and it will be a little while yet before part 3 is ready to publish. Sorry about the delay. Part three will feature more Mike and Teagan as their relationship continues to grow. Tory, is back home from college and is in for a big surprise. There is also a new girl...Skye. And yes, Sundee, the twins (at least Ally) and probably Skye will feature some in part 3 and much more in part 4.
Thanks for your patience!
|2012-07-01 13:11:15||Fucking Teagan - part 3||Sorry everyone! i promise I have not ditched the site or the story. I must admit i was not as pleased with the way Part 3 came out as I was with Parts 1&2. I decided to not rush and produce a better story in Part 4. Part 4 is about 65-70% finished. Unfortunately real life gets in the way of a good story sometimes. As I continue to write, I am open to some suggestions as to where to go with the story, once the team returns from Colorado...
Thanks for your patience!