Comments from Jay Tea

Date Story title Comment
2008-04-26 23:21:36 Two Exhibitionists Meet well, it was ok, but i would have liked it better if it would have been real exhibitionism and not this derssing room thing.
2008-04-30 21:21:50 Dad can play, too. well done my friend, maybe you would like parts of my own stories, too.
2008-04-30 21:45:47 Dad can play, too. Pt 2 well done. i liked the exhibitionition part and the discription of the smile. i think its the details you must pay attention to.
2008-05-01 23:23:42 I Love Dogs good narrator position, it makes the story very familar. the content was good, too. I certainly will read part two another time.
2008-05-06 17:20:46 My teachers feet i stopped readig after fife minutes, boring