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Date Story title Comment
2014-09-09 06:48:10 Pissing on the Zombie Bitches before Becky fists my asshole The most redeeming feature of your writing is you are brief. You take blessedly little time to tell your formulaic, repetitive, unimaginative crap. Fortunately there are much better writers to follow than you. It's a sad commentary when your pathetic prose is manipulated to appear to be recently added when it's just you begging for more attention. And like any truculent child, even negative attention is fine in your eyes. I wish I could vote on it again so I could give it another negative. Please stop writing until you find enough talent to write something decently indecent.
2014-09-10 07:24:14 Pissing on the Zombie Bitches before Becky fists my asshole I see you lack reading comprehension as well as writing skills. At least you give the kk freaks someplace to troll for guys like you who pretend to be girls.
2013-01-08 00:12:26 Pipe Crew XVIII While it is stylized around the Oregon of my younger days, it's all fiction. Instead of using all fictitious names, I have included some real places and some circular references to other places. Thank you for reading and thank you for making the great Tillamook Cheddar!
2013-07-08 00:28:03 Connor and Claudia I'd give this a neutral rating if there was one. I hate to give you a negative rating because I know how hard it is to write an effective erotic story. I enjoyed some of the elements. Take your time with the telling. After you finish writing your story, go back and expand on the details and help us see what you are describing. I look forward to your next installment. Claudia being pregnant this soon is too early. Let it be a near miss.
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