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Comments from Dino Aris

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Date Story title Comment
2013-02-21 06:34:41 Bait and Switch Retype - Ch 17-18 (Really) When DB posted it first time, I love the story. I still love it now even though you posted it again. The best part, you let us knew from the beginning why you're doing it. I applaud your decision and action. I sincerely hope you continue.

Ignore those defractors and just continue. Perhaps DB wanted to continue with a new chapter after the story concluded. Perhaps not, who knew. DB has already pass on.
2013-03-17 12:17:15 Eternal Destiny: Chapter Two All I can say is WOW!!!!! Considering what Mishi is going through, WOW!!!! And Captius its not easy for you to be the supporting pillar either!!!! All in all, I juz can't wait for the nx chapter.

Magic 101?????? Really?
Hmmmm.......
The last I check, there's no tag of Witchcraft and Wizadry. But anyway thanks Captius for explaining....... or was it Mishi....... LOL! Anyway who cares! Heck you don't have to be a walking encyclopedia to post here.
2013-03-28 17:13:17 FIre Class: Falling in Love Oooooh nice plot! Great story! But your spelling and grammar, plz IMPROVED or you'll bring the story down! I suggest spellcheck and proofread. Its good you decided to diverge the story to your own idea. But the biggest problem I dare say is, what if JWDD does not approve of you using or tinkering with it. Thats the Mickey!

You should at least try to get JWDD acknowledgement or approval first. I really hate to see this story go into limbo. But if it does, I suggest you create your own story using your current plotline.

Other than that I got no objection on what you do. I really like where you're going with this story and hope JWDD has no objection.
2013-04-14 15:31:11 Fire Class Going To School A different twist compare to JWDD original. I'm not going to compare which is better. But there were many spellings, grammar and word usage errors. Don't worry, I'm not trying to put you down or debase you. But constructive comments hopefully can help you improved. For eg 'Precocious', that's description were mainly used to describe badly behaved children. Cautious would be the correct words. Try used shorter and simpler sentences. There were many times I have to read and re read juz to grasp the true meaning.

Nevertheless I still enjoy reading your story. So it's +ve vote for me.
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