||thanks for the tips. long time reader, short time writer. appreciate feedback. i like stories that revolve around a unique innocent scenario. the setup is more of the turn on for me than the actual fucking. will keep working on new ideas. in the meantime let's get this forum to make it easier to do edits/deletions/etc. don't be ashamed of your fantasies. obviously we're not alone.
I see London, I see France...
||I admit this is not my most original premise, but it's somewhat based on a real life experience and I had to get it out of my system. It wasn't my daughter, but a family friend's and I never touched her, but everything about the game playing and her trying to look in to my pants really happened. Will work on more original scenarios in the future.
Independence Day by Zatharos
||My bad. Misspelled in the title. It's Zarathos. "Prom Night" is another good one on asstr. He has several others but I'm having trouble finding them right now as he used to go by another alias. Not looking for credit, just think this is the best story site going, and the best authors deserve to be shared.
A Family's Sex Education Part 1
||Good start Dad. Familiar themes but good flow and nice imagery.