Comments from Morlan502

Date Story title Comment
2012-06-02 17:46:05 First incest experience with my mother - Part 2 You might consider an editor to clean up some typos, some reoccurring, but otherwise having a good time reading!
2013-02-23 01:50:46 Mom taking care of me 3 If you are trying to write "more things for different people that enjoy different fetishes, " then how can this be a true story? A true story does not adjust for other people's interests. Grammar and syntax atrocious in all three chapters I have read so far. Premise is hot, that is the reason I have kept on reading.
2013-02-23 02:27:07 Mom taking care of me 4 Wett instead of wet; i instead of I, come on dude! So many examples of poor spelling and grammar. Takes away from the story SO much.
2013-05-04 23:57:43 I Was a Virgin Nymphomaniac Please, let us know what happened next!
2013-10-14 18:43:56 Mark and Kerry and me make a happy three "As we said our goodbyes the next day, they asked me not to tell Terry what had happened." I am guessing that should have read something like she asked me not to tell Terry. A very minor typo in a quite nice story!