My Cousin, Beth
||Just to clarify on the last comment... He was being judgmental, mostly due to his intoxicated state, but also out of frustration. I didn't think the statement would come of as sounding too harsh because he was already using the poor girl... He didn't even know her name. But I appreciate the comments and will try to explain the state of mind better next time.... As well as amp up the sex details. Any other constructive criticism is welcome, as I said before this is my first time.