Comments from darthel0101
|2012-06-19 04:48:05||Room Service Anyone?||Major blooper right at the beginning
"He groaned as he sunk the head of his cock into her wet cunt. …
Her lips wrapped around his dick. …"
|2012-06-19 04:48:49||Enslaved||This really needs a second installment|
|2012-06-19 23:01:49||The Changeling Baby.||Wonderfully shadowed with a beautiful twist in the end.|
|2012-07-03 02:02:50||A Game of Inches - Part Ten||This is one tremendous story and WELL worth the read; I hope you are able to continue it soon.
I hated to see the twist at the end and hope that you are able to resolve the issues with Ashley, Alexis, and Jenny without tearing Brian up any more.
|2012-07-04 11:59:40||Memorable story; I enjoyed the original as well. You write extremely good, DC.
Too bad that somebody with limited literacy tried to rip off your ability.