Comments from darthel0101
|2012-06-18 05:33:53||Roses are Red (or, "The Red Girl").||I really enjoyed the tale and wish that I had read it out here instead of the annotated version in the forums first; this version is not as compelling to read.
I enjoyed the twists in the tails and the grist in the nails; you have made this story yours. Is there any hope to see more of it in the future?
|2012-06-18 15:23:20||When the Voyeur Decides to Play||This one should have been added to my short list (making 6 to choose from) but I could not see the story from the title.
One small, but fatal, error in the competition.
|2012-06-19 02:24:24||A happier Anniversary||well done - beautiful twist at the end
Too bad that this isn't the same universe as Bride's Maid. This would have been a worthy sequel.
|2012-06-19 04:44:49||Room Service Anyone?||Major blooper right at the beginning
"He groaned as he sunk the head of his cock into her wet cunt. …
Her lips wrapped around his dick. …"
|2012-06-19 04:45:39||Room Service Anyone?||forgive the formatting problem in the comments - apparently this venue has some problems|