Comments from darthel0101

Date Story title Comment
2012-06-19 04:48:05 Room Service Anyone? Major blooper right at the beginning
"He groaned as he sunk the head of his cock into her wet cunt. …

Her lips wrapped around his dick. …"
2012-06-19 04:48:49 Enslaved This really needs a second installment
2012-06-19 23:01:49 The Changeling Baby. Wonderfully shadowed with a beautiful twist in the end.
2012-07-03 02:02:50 A Game of Inches - Part Ten This is one tremendous story and WELL worth the read; I hope you are able to continue it soon.
I hated to see the twist at the end and hope that you are able to resolve the issues with Ashley, Alexis, and Jenny without tearing Brian up any more.
2012-07-04 11:59:40 Memorable story; I enjoyed the original as well. You write extremely good, DC.
Too bad that somebody with limited literacy tried to rip off your ability.