Comments from darthel0101

Date Story title Comment
2012-06-18 05:33:53 Roses are Red (or, "The Red Girl"). I really enjoyed the tale and wish that I had read it out here instead of the annotated version in the forums first; this version is not as compelling to read.

I enjoyed the twists in the tails and the grist in the nails; you have made this story yours. Is there any hope to see more of it in the future?
2012-06-18 15:23:20 When the Voyeur Decides to Play This one should have been added to my short list (making 6 to choose from) but I could not see the story from the title.
One small, but fatal, error in the competition.
2012-06-19 02:24:24 A happier Anniversary well done - beautiful twist at the end
Too bad that this isn't the same universe as Bride's Maid. This would have been a worthy sequel.
2012-06-19 04:44:49 Room Service Anyone? Major blooper right at the beginning
"He groaned as he sunk the head of his cock into her wet cunt. …

Her lips wrapped around his dick. …"
2012-06-19 04:45:39 Room Service Anyone? forgive the formatting problem in the comments - apparently this venue has some problems