Comments from darthel0101

Date Story title Comment
2012-07-03 02:02:50 A Game of Inches - Part Ten This is one tremendous story and WELL worth the read; I hope you are able to continue it soon.
I hated to see the twist at the end and hope that you are able to resolve the issues with Ashley, Alexis, and Jenny without tearing Brian up any more.
2012-07-04 11:59:40 Memorable story; I enjoyed the original as well. You write extremely good, DC.
Too bad that somebody with limited literacy tried to rip off your ability.
2012-07-11 11:45:34 Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 28 The Daughter War Begins The only thing that I dislike about your chapters is the way that you end them on a cliff. I would much rather see the chapters begin with something beginning to happen than begin with something having already happened.
2012-07-16 03:41:23 The Librarian and the Bartender WONDERFUL story; GREAT character development.
More; please write more.
2014-05-15 11:58:36 Boy in the grass 57 You would think that the person giving negative votes would realize that too many other people are willing to give this story positives.

This was definitely a good feel-good chapter and I like the motorcycle concept. I also like the way that Max kept his promise to Carol. The only problem is that it creates a permanent drain on medical/support resources.