Comments from darthel0101
|2012-07-03 02:02:50||A Game of Inches - Part Ten||This is one tremendous story and WELL worth the read; I hope you are able to continue it soon.
I hated to see the twist at the end and hope that you are able to resolve the issues with Ashley, Alexis, and Jenny without tearing Brian up any more.
|2012-07-04 11:59:40||Memorable story; I enjoyed the original as well. You write extremely good, DC.
Too bad that somebody with limited literacy tried to rip off your ability.
|2012-07-11 11:45:34||Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 28 The Daughter War Begins||The only thing that I dislike about your chapters is the way that you end them on a cliff. I would much rather see the chapters begin with something beginning to happen than begin with something having already happened.|
|2012-07-16 03:41:23||The Librarian and the Bartender||WONDERFUL story; GREAT character development.
More; please write more.
|2014-05-15 11:58:36||Boy in the grass 57||You would think that the person giving negative votes would realize that too many other people are willing to give this story positives.
This was definitely a good feel-good chapter and I like the motorcycle concept. I also like the way that Max kept his promise to Carol. The only problem is that it creates a permanent drain on medical/support resources.